英语短文改错重点分析总结

　　答案及解析

　　1. 删去 time。

　　2. 第一个 a 改为 an。

　　3. for 改为 of。

　　4. drove 改为 drive。to meet 和 to drive 是平行结构， 可视为 drive 前省略 to。

　　5.his改为their。此处为指代错误。因为指史密斯夫妇， 故用their。

　　6. 此行无错。

　　7. have改为had。综观全篇可知， 此处应为一般过去时态。

　　8. 在eager前加were。eager是形容词， 需与系动词共同构成谓语。

　　9. question改为questions。此处为可数名词。

　　10. 删去in。含有this, last, next等的时间状语前不加介词。

　　NMET 1997

　　Dear Bob,

　　Hello. I learn about you from my English teacher, 1. _______

　　Miss Fang. I’d like to your penfriend, and get to 2. _______

　　know more about your country.

　　First, let me tell you something more about myself.3. _______

　　My name is Li Hua. I live in Beijing, where is the 4. _______

　　capital of China. I go to Hongqi Middle School. We5. _______

　　study quite a few subject, such as maths, Chinese, 6. _______

　　English and physics. I use to play ping-pong a lot7. _______

　　in my spare time, but now I am interesting in football.8. _______

　　Do you play any ball games? What your favorite9. _______

　　sport? I look forward to hear from you soon. 10. ______

　　Yours,

　　Li Hua

　　答案及解析

　　1. learn 改为 learnt或learned。

　　2. to 后加 be 或 become。

　　3. 删去more。第一次告诉 Bob 关于自己的一些事情， 此处用 more 不合逻辑。

　　4. where 改为 which。在此非限定性定语从句中， 关系词在从句中作主语， 故用 which。

　　5. 此行无错。

　　6. subject 改为 subjects。quits a few 意为“相当多”， 修饰可数名词复数。

　　7. use 改为 used。据下代 but now 可知， 此处应用used to do 表示“过去常常 做某事”。

　　8. interesting 改为 interested。be interested in…为固定短语， “对……感兴趣”。

　　9. What 后加 is。此句无谓语。

　　10. hear 改为 hearing。look forward to doing sth.为固定短语。

　　NMET 1998

　　My Favorite Sport

　　My favorite sport is football. I was a member of 1. _______

　　our school football team. We practise for three times 2. _______

　　every week and often watch football match on TV 3. _______

　　together. Play football not only makes us grow 4. _______

　　tall and strong but also give us a sense of fair play and 5. _______

　　team spirit. We must keep in mind that we play6. _______

　　for the team instead ourselves. Also, the sport 7. _______

　　teaches us the important of obedience (服从). Each8. _______

　　player must obey captain, who is the leader of 9. _______

　　the team. And they must not break the rules too 10. ______

　　often if we want to win the game.

　　答案及解析

　　1. was 改为 am。综观全篇时态可知。

　　2.删去 for。time 表示次数时， 之前一般无介词， 直接用作状语。如： We have meals three times a day。

　　3. match 改为 matches。

　　4. Play 改为 Playing。此处应用动名词作主语， 表示经常性、 习惯性动作， 而动词不定式作主语则表示一两次的动作。

　　5. give 改为 gives。此处和上代 makes 一起作谓语， 属平行结构。

　　6. 此行无错。

　　7. instead 后加 of。instead 为副词， instead of 为介词短语。此处接宾语 ourselves， 需用介词短语。

　　8. important 改为 importance。

　　9. captain 前后 the。像 chairman， captain， monitor， mayor 这类词表示职务时， 前面用零冠词。但如这类职务用于指某人时， 前面用定冠词。

　　10. they 改为 we。

　　NMET 1999

　　The Problem with Television

　　Now I can’t watch much television but a few years 1. _______

　　ago I was used to watch it every night. I was often 2. _______

　　a little tired after a day’s work and watch TV 3. _______

　　demands very little effort. Unfortunate, there are 4. _______

　　too many people among my family. Some wanted 5. _______

　　to see the programme while others preferred 6. _______

　　another. I am happy with any programme but 7. _______

　　the others spent a lot time arguing and there 8. _______

　　was no way of settling the matter except by 9. _______

　　selling the TV set. Now someone at home reads instead. 10. ______

　　答案及解析

　　1. 删去 much。“I can’t watch much television”意为“我不能看许多电视”， 上下代逻辑不通。much 属于多余。

　　2. 删去 was。由上代句意可知“我现在不看电视， 而过去每晚都看电视”， 因此应用 used to do。

　　3. watch 改为 watching。作句子主语需用动名词。

　　4. Unfortunate 改为 Unfortunately。此处应用副词作状语。

　　5. among 改为 in。“in my family”为习惯搭配， 意为“在我家中”。

　　6. the 改为 one。由下代的another可知， 上代用one。

　　7. am 改为 was。综观全代时态可知。

　　8. a lot 后加 of。

　　9. 此行无错。

　　10. someone 改为 everyone 或 everybody。someone 意为“某个人”； everyone/ everybody 意为“每个人”。根据上下代逻辑可知。

　　2000 春季

　　Dear Peter,

　　Thanks very much on inviting me to your birthday 1. _______

　　party on Sunday. I’d like very much come but 2. _______

　　had an examination on Monday morning. It is 3. _______

　　a very important exam but I can’t afford to 4. _______

　　fail it. I’ll spend all the whole weekend reading 5. _______

　　and prepare for it. So I’m really sorry that I 6. _______

　　won’t be able to come in this time. Hope you7. _______

　　can understand. I’ll take this chance to wish 8. _______

　　you wonderful time on your birthday. Happy 9. _______

　　birthday, Peter, and many happy return of the day!10. ______

　　Yours,

　　Li Ming

　　答案及解析

　　1. on 改为 for。动词 thank 与名词 thanks 通常与介词 for 搭配。

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