英语短文改错重点分析总结

　　if something he did made people angry. For 7. _______

　　instance, on one night he played strong and 8. _______

　　loudly music till four o’clock in the morning. But 9. _______

　　he is difference now. He often helps grandma 10.______

　　with housework, helps mom with cooking and helps his

　　classmates with their lessons.

　　答案及解析

　　1. want 后加 to。want to do sth. 为固定搭配。

　　2. them 改为 it。依据上下代， 前句 a chocolate cake 为可数名词单数， 后边的代词显然用 it， 而不是 them。

　　3. where 改为 which/that 或删去 where。此为定语从句， 先行词 place在从句中作 find 的宾语， 只能用关系代词 which 或 that 或省略。

　　4. other 改为 others 。不定代词 other 指另一个， 而 others 指另一些。

　　5. 第一个 is 改为 was。此题考查动词的时态。

　　6.making 改为 made。本句缺少谓语， 需要把making 改为 make 的一般过去时态。

　　7. 此行无错。

　　8. 删去 on。one night 前不需要任何介词。

　　9. loudly 改为 loud。loudly 是副词， 此处修饰名词 music， 应用形容词。

　　10. difference 改为 different。应用形容词与系动词一起构成系表结构。

　　NMET 2002

　　Last week my parents and I took a two-day trip to Emei

　　Mountain in Sichuan. As everyone knows, it’s famous1. _______

　　mountain with all kinds of plants and animals. The weather2. _______

　　was fine. It was about noon we arrived at the foot of 3 _______

　　the mountain. The three of them were very excited. As we 4._______

　　climbed the mountain, we fed monkeys, visiting temples 5. _______

　　and told stories. On the way up I was busy taking picture 6. _______

　　since the scenery was so beautiful. The time passes quickly.7. _______

　　Evening came down. We spent the night in a hotel at8. _______

　　the top of the mountain. The food was expensive and 9. _______

　　the service was good. I was so tired that I fell asleep

　　at the moment my head touched the pillow.10. ______

　　答案及解析

　　1. famous 前加 a。mountain 为可数名词。又是第一次被谈及， 故应在 famous 前加不定冠词。

　　2. 此行无错。

　　3. noon 后加 when 。It was about noon 是主句， 后面的应为从句， 故在 noon 后加when， 此处 when 意为“在……时候”。

　　4. them 改为 us。综观全代可知， 此代是用第一人称的口吻来叙述的。

　　5. visiting 改为 visited。此处climbed， visited 和 told 构成并列谓语。

　　6. picture 改为 pictures。

　　7. passes 改为 passed。应与全代时态一致。

　　8. 删去 down。

　　9. and 改为 but。饭菜很贵不是一件令人愉快的事， 而服务质量很高确实是一件好事， 故前后为转折关系。

　　10. 删去 at。the moment直接引导时间状语从句。

　　2002北京卷

　　What should you do when your parents become1. _______

　　angry? If your parents got mad, try to have a conversation2. _______

　　with them about it . Remembering not to shout 3. _______

　　at them. They usually will try to change, but they will 4. _______

　　take some time because they get angry all their life, and that 5. _______

　　is all they know . You might have to change for your6. _______

　　method a couple of times. Do any nice things for your7. _______

　　parents that they don’t expect—like cooking,

　　doing the dishes, washing clothes, or clean 8. _______

　　the floors. If this doesn’t work , bring in friend that you 9. _______

　　feel comfortable, and have him or her help you.10. ______

　　答案及解析

　　1. 此行无错。

　　2. got 改为get。通读全篇， 可知道本代基本时态应为一般现在时。

　　3. Remembering 改为 Remember。本句为祈使句， 表示建议， 主语省略。

　　4. they 改为 it。they 前为转折连词 but， 表明其后为一个句子， 这里应用 it 代表前面整个句子。如： Tom’s mother kept telling him that he should study harder， but it didn’t help。此处的代词 it， 代替“Tom’s mother kept telling him that he should study harder”这一句子的内容。

　　5. life 改为 lives。这是考查名词的数， life 是可数名词单数， 句子主语用的是they， 与其一致应用lives。

　　6. 删去 for。因为 change 作“改换”讲时为及物动词。如： Can you change me one yuan note?你能兑换一元零钱给我吗?而 change for作“转换车到……”解。如： Where should you change for Guilin? 你在什么地方转车到桂林去?

　　7. any 改为 some。any 一般用于疑问句、 否定句、 条件从句中， 而 some 一般用于肯定句中。此处为祈使肯定式， 故用 some。

　　8. clean 改为 cleaning。应与 cooking， doing， washing 一致， 作介词宾语。

　　9. friend 前加 a。friend 为普通可数名词单数， 其前应加不定冠词 a。

　　10. comfortable 后加 with。comfortable with 意为“与……自在/愉快”。例如：

　　She feels comfortable with those who speaks English。她和讲英语的人谈话觉得很自在。

　　2003春季

　　Many teachers worry about the effects of television on young

　　people. According to studies, any children spend more time 1. _______

　　watching television than they spend in school. Because so 2. _______

　　much viewing, children may not be develop the habit of3. _______

　　read and the ability to enjoy themselves. No one worries 4. _______

　　much about the radio program young people listen to, 5. _______

　　although radios can be very noise. Teachers also wonder 6. _______

　　about the effects of television commercials. On one year the 7. _______

　　average child will see 25,000 television commercials, all 8. _______

　　planned and written by grown-ups to make children to want9. _______

　　things that they don’t real need. 10. ______

　　答案及解析

　　1. any 改为 many/some。根据句意， 此处应表示“一些， 许多”， 而 any 表示“一些”时， 常常用于否定句、 疑问句和条件句中。

　　2. Because 后面加 of。此处 so much viewing 相当于一个名词， 故加 of。

　　3. 删去 be。此处 may not develop 已经构成谓语动词部分， be 属于多余。

　　4. read 改为 reading。of 为介词， 后面需要接名词、 代词、 动名词作宾语。

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