英语短文改错重点分析总结

　　meeting hold by our school. At the meeting, 25 2. _______

　　advanced teachers were praised and those had3. _______

　　completed 30 years of teaching were given medals.4. _______

　　My the first English teacher was one of those praised.5. _______

　　After the meeting, my classmates and I went to see them.6. _______

　　Seeing us, the grey-haried teacher looked

　　exciting. When we said we all wanted to be teachers 7. _______

　　and devoted ourselves to education in the future, he8. _______

　　nodded with satisfaction. He said in firm voice, 9. _______

　　“teaching is a noble job. Man would be stupid with 10. _______

　　education.” We all agreed and were greatly encouraged by his words.

　　答案及解析

　　1. Teacher’s改为Teachers’。“……(人)的节日”一般用名词复数表泛指。如： Children’s Day, Women’s Day等。

　　2. hold改为held。此处为过去分词作定语表被动关系。

　　3. had前加who。仔细分析句子结构便可知此处应为定语从句， those或all等词后只能接who， 不能用that。

　　4. 此行无错。

　　5. 删去the。序数词前有my等形容词性物主代词时， 不需要用定冠词。

　　6. them改为him。代词指代应一致。根据下代the grey-haired teacher看出， 此处应为him。

　　7. exciting改为excited。人作主语时， 表语一般用过去分词； 物作主语则用现在分词。

　　8. devoted改为devote。根据句意可知， and后的devote应与不定式短语be teachers并列。

　　9. in后加a。in a loud/low voice为固定短语。

　　10. with改为without。介词逻辑错误。根据常识可判断， 该处想表达的原意为“没有教育， 人类将会愚昧无知”。

　　Exercise 9

　　The other day my brother Tom was beginning his 1. _______

　　motorbike then our neighbor, Mary came out and asked 2. _______

　　him if he was going near the station. So he offered her a lift.

　　She got at the back of the motorbike and3. _______

　　they drove away. Just before they reached to the station4. _______

　　a policeman waved to them to stop. “Excuse me, sir,” he

　　said. “You are not sitting on that motorbike properly.”

　　“What’s matter with the way I’m sitting?” my brother5. _______

　　asked in surprise. “Not you, sir. It’s a young lady,” said 6. _______

　　the policeman. “In this country side-saddle(偏座) is not 7. _______

　　permitted when one ride a motorbike.” Mary made an excuse 8. _______

　　that she was from Italy, where it isn’t considering to9. _______

　　break the law when people take the side-saddle.

　　The policeman shook head and drove away.10. ______

　　答案及解析

　　1. beginning改为starting。begin和start都有“开始”的意思， 但start还可指开动机器等。该句中表示“开动， 发动”， 因此应用start。

　　2. then改为when。当前一个分句动作正在进行时， 突然又发生了另一动作， 应用连词when。

　　3. at改为on。get on为固定的动词短语， 意为“上车”。

　　4. 删去to。reach为及物动词， 其后不接介词。

　　5. matter前加the。“What’s the matter with...?”是日常生活中常用口语句型。

　　6. a改为the。这里的young lady特指上代的青年妇女， 其前应用定冠词the。

　　7. 此行无错。

　　8. ride改为rides。在when引导的时间状语从句中， 主语为第三人称单数， 谓语为一般现在时态， 也应用动词第三人称单数。

　　9. considering改为considered。在where引导的非限制性定语从句中， 主语是谓语动作的承受者， 应为被动语态。

　　10. head前加his。head为可数名词， 其前应加限定词。

　　Exercise 10

　　Japan is a beautiful country, covering with many1. _______

　　tiny rivers and high mountains. Japan is also a pleased 2. _______

　　country. It is known for “the land of the cherry blossom3. _______

　　(樱花)” because of the spring of the year the cherry 4. _______

　　trees are so beautiful. Everywhere there are hundred of 5. _______

　　different kinds of wild flowers. Where there are

　　not natural gardens, the Japanese 6. _______

　　has made their own. Because the islands are so hilly7. _______

　　there is a great shortage of the soil, so very little bit 8. _______

　　is used. No matter how tiny may be, every home has its 9. _______

　　own little garden. Japan is a country worthy of a visit. 10. ______

　　答案及解析

　　1. covering改为covered。be covered with是固定搭配， 意为“为……所覆盖”， 此处过去分词短语作后置定语， 修饰country。

　　2. pleased改为pleasant。pleased意为“感动高兴的”， 通常用来指人； pleasant意为“令人高兴的”， 通常用来指物。

　　3. for改为as。be known for是“因……而众所周知”的意思； be known as意为“以……知名”。

　　4. of改为in。此处because引导原因状语从句， 从句中in the spring of the year作时间状语。

　　5. hundred改为hundreds。固定词组hundreds of意为“数以百计的”。

　　6. not改为no。not为副词， 不能修饰名词； 修饰名词gardens应用no。

　　7. has改为have。the Japanese指的是日本人民， 应用复数形式。

　　8. 删去the。soil为物质名词， 其前不用定冠词。

　　9. tiny后加it。此处让步状语从句缺主语。

　　10. 此行无错。

　　第三章　　历年高考改错真题

　　(1996年～2007年)

　　NMET 1996

　　Today I visited the Smiths—my first time visit 1. _______

　　to a American family. They live in a small 2. _______

　　town. It was very kind for them to meet me 3. _______

　　at the railway station and drove me to their home.4. _______

　　The Smiths did his best to make me feel 5. _______

　　at home. They offered me coffee and other 6. _______

　　drinks. We have a good time talking and laughing 7. _______

　　together. They eager to know everything about 8. _______

　　China and asked me lots of question. In fact, 9. _______

　　they are planning to visit China in next year.10. ______

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