英语短文改错重点分析总结

　　earth is very small in comparison. The sun make 9. _______

　　us to feel hot, even at a distance of 93 million miles. 10. ______

　　答案及解析

　　1. depend后加on。此处depend为不及物动词， 应与on连用， 表示“依赖， 依靠”。

　　2. warm改为warmth。warm为形容词， 在its后应用名词warmth作feel的宾语。

　　3. 删去about。此处consider为及物动词， 直接接宾语。

　　4. 此行无错。

　　5. their改为its。依上代此处指代“太阳的”。

　　6. spend改为take。take应由物作主语， 表示时间或金钱的花费， 而spend则通常用人作主语。

　　7. by改为in。in the fastest rocket为固定用法， 表示具体的运输工具。

　　8. satellite改为star。satellite意为“卫星”， star多用来指恒星。

　　9. make改为makes。此处make应与主语第三人称单数the sun保持一致。

　　10. 删去to。当不定式作make的宾语补足语时， 应省略to。

　　Exercise 5

　　After I finished the school this year, I began to 1. _______

　　look for work. Now several month later, I still hadn’t2. _______

　　found the job that I was interested. Last Sunday morning3. _______

　　I received a phone call from a man calling him Mr. Smith. 4. _______

　　He said to me on the phone, “I hear you do very 5. _______

　　well in your studies. I may provide a job for you.” I entered 6. _______

　　his office with a beaten heart. How I hoped that I 7. _______

　　will go through the job -hunting talk today and he would8. _______

　　take me on as a lab assistant. But to my surprised, 9. _______

　　what he said disappointing. He only needed a model. 10. ______

　　答案及解析

　　1. 删去the。冠词错误。finish school意为“完成学业， 毕业”， school为抽象名词， 前不加冠词。

　　2. month改为months。名词单复数错误。several修饰可数名词复数形式。

　　3. interested后加in。介词错误。be interested in是固定词组。

　　4. him改为himself。代词错误， 根据代意应为“自称是”。

　　5. do改为did。动词错误。句意应为“我听说你(过去)学习不错”， 因为现已毕业。

　　6. 此行无错。

　　7. beaten改为beating。非谓语动词错误。a beating heart相当于a heart which is beating。

　　8. will改为would。动词时态错误。主句是过去时， 宾语从句要用相应的时态。

　　9. surprised改为surprise。to one’s surprise/joy为习语搭配， 只能是名词。

　　10. said后加was。动词谓语漏用错误。What he said是主语从句， was disappointing是谓语。

　　Exercise 6

　　Once an old man saw a bag on his way to home. 1. _______

　　In the bag there was a wolf. It was catching and put in 2. _______

　　the bag by a shepherd(牧羊人) a few minutes ago.

　　The wolf asked the old man to let him out.3. _______

　　The old man took pity on him and opened bag.4. _______

　　When the wolf got out, said to the old man, “I am very hungry. 5. _______

　　I want to eat you.” The other old man could do nothing 6. _______

　　and cry for help. Just then the shepherd came and saw this. 7. _______

　　He beat the wolf to death by a stick. Then he said to the 8. _______

　　old man, “wolves want to eat men all the time. It’s nature 9. _______

　　will never change. We should took this as a good lesson.” 10. ______

　　答案及解析

　　1. 删去to。home是副词， 前面不能接介词。

　　2. catching改为caught。主语it与catch的关系为被动关系， 故用was caught。

　　3. 此行无错。

　　4. bag前加the。bag在此重复提到， 为特指。

　　5. said前加he。代词漏用错误。此句缺少主语， 并且要与上代him保持一致。

　　6. 删去other。接上下代没有“另一个老人”。

　　7. and(cry)改为but(cry)。can do nothing but意为“只得做”， 为习惯搭配。

　　8. by改为with。介词错误。“用……工具”常用“with...”。

　　9. It’s改为Its。同音词混淆错误。此处应为“它的本性”。

　　10. took改为take。情态动词后应接动词原形。

　　Exercise 7

　　Dear Sir,

　　I’m glad to recommend (推荐) to you my friend Li Ming.

　　Li Ming was born on July 15, in 1974 in Beijing. 1. _______

　　He graduated from Xisi Primary School in 1986. 2. _______

　　When he was in the middle school, he did good in maths, 3. _______

　　physics and chemistry and fond of art. After graduating 4. _______

　　from No.4 High School, he entered into Beijing 5. _______ www.16qiuxue.com 　

　　University study physics. After four years of hard 6. _______

　　work there, he went to the United States for farther7. _______

　　study. Because of his excellent work, he get a doctor’s 8. _______

　　degree in physics this year. He is now in good

　　health but would like to make contributions to our 9. _______

　　country. I should be most grateful if you would favorably

　　consider my recommendation.

　　Looking forward to receive your early reply.10. ______

　　Yours truly,

　　Wang Li

　　答案及解析

　　1. 删去1974前的in。时间状语是年、 月、 日的只需用一个介词； 但若是年、 月、 日、 时的， 则要用at six thirty, on the morning of May 4th, 2001。

　　2. 此行无错。

　　3. good改为well。固定词组be good at, do well in意为“在……学得很好”。

　　4. fond前加was。动词谓语残缺错误。fond是形容词， and引导并列谓语结构， 故用词组was fond of。

　　5. 删去into。动词enter是及物动词， 直接接宾语。

　　6. study前加to。此处用不定式短语作目的状语。

　　7. farther改为further。farther意为“更远的”， 表示实际距离； further意为“深远的， 进一步的”， 指抽象概念， 这里为“深造学习”， 应用further study。

　　8. get改为got。时态错误。

　　9. but改为and。根据上下代逻辑， 前后两分句为并列递进关系， 而非转折关系。

　　10. receive改为receiving。look forward to中的to为介词， 后面应接名词或动名词。

　　Exercise 8

　　Sept. 10th Wednesday Fine

　　Today is Teacher’s Day. I attended a celebration1. _______

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